Congratulations to the winners of the first annual National Residential Education Essay Contests:
Student Essay Contest Winners:
First Place – Carlos M., Florida Sheriffs Boys Ranch, Live Oak, FL
Second Place – Ugo U., Girard College, Philadelphia, PA
Third Place – Danielle M., Milton Hershey School, Hershey, PA
Honorable Student Mentions:
Nathaniel S., Florida Sheriffs Youth Ranches
Kelsey F., Florida Sheriffs Youth Villa
Victoria M., Milton Hershey School
Alumni Essay Contest Winners:
First Place – Marcus Wright, Girard College Alumnus
Second Place – Heather Reed, Methodist Children’s Home of Texas Alumna
Third Place – Wayne Scott James, Connie Maxwell Children’s Home Alumnus
Responding to the student essay contest question “How has living and learning at a residential education program impacted your life?” Carlos M. of Florida Sheriffs Boys Ranch says:
The Ranch is a better community to help me with my behavior. They are teaching me to deal with my problems and attitude. It has stopped me from doing the things that got me in trouble. Without the Ranch, I would be locked up or on the streets. I am getting to know a lot of people, but not just anyone. Cottage parents, teachers, and counselors help you make good choices. I am thankful for my cottage parents helping me with my ups and downs and through tough situations.
My school notes are improving and I am in class learning every day. My class behavior has improved, and so have my grades. I want to get back on track and take advantage of the opportunities I have been given.
I have apologized to my Mom for giving her a hard time. She worked 11 hours a day just to feed, cloth, and shelter me. She works too hard for me to treat her bad. I am sorry, Mom, I love you. I am blessed to have a chance to change my life. By coming to the Florida Sheriffs Boys Ranch, my family and I have a chance to turn my ways around. I wish many other boys could have this chance.
Ugo U. discusses the unique opportunities she has had at Girard College and the positive influence of her peers and staff:
Being in a residential education program has given me the support system that one can only dream of having during elementary, middle, and high school. As I grew up in the tight-knit community of Girard College, the connections I made with the faculty and alumni became unbreakable. If I asked for something, full attention and support was paid. This summer, I had the amazing opportunity to spend eight weeks at Harvard University taking classes and experiencing college life.
In a way, my peers have become my extended family. They are always there when I need them. They have seen me grow and go through the most personal trials and tribulations. Consequently, they have become the strong boulder I need when I am unable to hold myself up. I do not think the same kind of relationships can be formed at a non-residential school.
Being at Girard helped me develop a sense of independence. Now, when I am about to head out to college, I am not afraid of being away from home. I have already acquired the skills necessary to successfully enter the real world.
The time of my life when I entered Girard College has always been a bittersweet memory. It was bitter because I had just lost my parents and was about to leave my friends as well. I did not see it then, but it was also sweet. It was sweet because it set me up to be prepared for the world and gave me an infallible support system as I enter the real world. Entrance to my boarding school was the greatest thing that happened to me.
Danielle M. of Milton Hershey School writes:
I am confident when I say I would not be the person I am today without the experiences I have within residential education. I almost wish I would have come sooner. I’m so thankful not only because of what it has done for me but for what it will do for others.
I’ve met people that have helped me make it through the hard times and have ultimately given me the courage to make it through this challenging life. I’ve learned so much about diversity, youth, and about the struggles that people face day in and day out. Residential education has made me more responsible and mature. It has developed me into a role model for my younger peers and it has established me with the qualities I need to be successful in life.
A lot of people believe that residential education is a horrible idea and that it only causes problems. But that clearly is not true, I am a witness. It builds each individual and prepares them for society. It gives those students around the world the chance to succeed in life, and make a promising life for themselves and their future families.
Responding to the alumni essay contest question “How has your residential education experience impacted your life?” Marcus Wright, Girard College alumnus, writes:
Without Girard, I do not think I would understand the beauty of camaraderie; how the peer you don’t know or may not share many traits with would soon feel like a brother or sister to you. How the man or woman years older than you that you never met before could feel like a mother or father, and would be there for you just like one. Without Girard, I would not know the greatness of community, and the importance of giving your time and your energy to others. The education I received at Girard was not just about math and science. It was about the importance of the person next to you, and the sacrifices of the person watching over you. It taught me to appreciate so much in myself, in people, and in life.
I did not know what Girard College had in store for me. But from the second I met my residential advisor, it all fell into place. I was going to grow. I was going to mature, and I was going to become something special because of Girard. I could feel it then, and I have felt it ever since.
CORE received dozens of compelling submissions from students and alumni, and thanks everyone who shared their thoughts and personal stories.